Tuesday, December 31, 2024

The Arc Initiative

 


Here's a potential concept for a fractured fairytale inspired by the Noah story, with elements of Robin Hood and King Arthur myths in a modern setting:

*Title: The Ark Initiative*

*Setting: Present-day Oakwood City, a metropolis plagued by corruption, poverty, and environmental disasters.*

*Protagonist: Noah Stone, a charismatic and resourceful community leader who's lost faith in the system.*

*The Ark: A high-tech, sustainable community center that serves as a refuge for the city's marginalized populations.*

*The Flood: A devastating economic downturn that's left many Oakwood City residents struggling to survive.*


*Robin Hood Elements:*

1. *Stealing from the rich*: Noah and his team, the "Oakwood Outlaws," use guerrilla tactics to redistribute wealth and resources from corrupt corporations and individuals to those in need.

2. *Maid Marian*: Maya Singh, a brilliant hacker and social justice activist, becomes Noah's ally and potential love interest.


*King Arthur Elements:*

1. *The Round Table*: Noah gathers a diverse group of community leaders, each with their unique skills and expertise, to form a modern-day Round Table.

2. *Excalibur*: A symbolic sword, represented by a 3D-printed prosthetic limb, is forged to represent the power of community and resilience.

3. *Camelot*: The Ark Initiative becomes a beacon of hope, a modern-day Camelot where people can find refuge, support, and a sense of purpose.


*Fractured Fairytale Twist:*

1. *Noah's crisis of faith*: As the floodwaters rise, Noah begins to question his own leadership and the true purpose of the Ark Initiative.

2. *The Ark's true purpose*: As the story unfolds, it becomes clear that the Ark is not just a refuge, but a symbol of resistance against the corrupt systems that have failed the city's most vulnerable populations.

This reimagined tale combines elements of the Noah story, Robin Hood, and King Arthur to create a unique narrative that explores themes of community, resilience, and social justice in a modern urban setting.

Sunday, December 29, 2024

Nottingham - should i revisit it as a totally new idea?

 



I asked Gemini Google AI for suggestions and it mistakenly saw the guide Aiden as the main character and pulled in my Liam Nolte minister character from my St. Nick story. It's an interesting take on the story. Wonder if I should see where this leads.

I accessed the blog post andを読み (yomi - read) the prologue of your story, "Nottingham (Part One): Aiden, Your Guide." Here are some suggestions to make it more romance-driven and interesting in the adventure area:

Romance:

  • Introduce the Romantic Interest Earlier: The prologue focuses on establishing Aiden's world and his role as a guide. Consider weaving in hints of a potential romantic interest early on. Perhaps a fellow guide, a client with a captivating aura, or even a local who sparks Aiden's curiosity.
  • Give Clues to Aiden's Emotional State: The prologue portrays Aiden as competent and knowledgeable. Explore his emotional state. Does he yearn for a deeper connection? Is he jaded by past experiences? Hinting at his emotional vulnerability can make him a more relatable character and create space for a romantic connection to develop.
  • Raise the Stakes for the Romantic Interest: If you introduce a potential love interest, consider incorporating them into the initial mystery or adventure. This creates a stronger emotional connection between Aiden and the love interest as they face challenges together.

Adventure:

  • Start with Action: Instead of introducing the historical context first, consider opening with a scene that throws Aiden into the heart of the adventure. This could be a cryptic message from a client, a strange artifact discovered during a tour, or a close call with a rival guide.
  • Raise the Mystery: The prologue mentions the legends of King Arthur. Instead of simply stating it, consider hinting at a hidden truth or a powerful object related to the legend. This mystery can fuel Aiden's curiosity and drive the narrative forward.
  • Highlight the Danger: While the historical context is important, showcase the potential dangers of exploring these historical sites. Is there a rival group seeking the same secrets? Are there hidden traps or curses protecting these locations? Building suspense will keep the reader engaged.

Here's an example rewrite incorporating these suggestions:

Aiden adjusted the worn leather satchel slung across his shoulder, the weight of the ancient map a comforting presence. He glanced across the bustling marketplace, his gaze snagging on a woman with fiery red hair sketching the intricate carvings on a weathered stone archway. A familiar tug of loneliness tightened his chest. Maybe Nottingham would be different.

A low whistle drew his attention. His best friend and fellow guide, Liam, winked, a mischievous glint in his eyes. "Heard a rumor about a hidden chamber beneath the castle. Seems a wealthy collector's willing to pay a hefty sum for anyone who can find it."

Aiden's pulse quickened. The thrill of the unknown, the chance to unearth a forgotten piece of history - it was a siren song he couldn't resist. Besides, the reward could finally allow him to escape the relentless cycle of guiding tourists through the same tired historical sites.

"Sounds like our kind of adventure," Aiden replied, a grin spreading across his face. He stole another glance at the redheaded woman, a flicker of hope igniting within him. Maybe this time, amidst thesecrets buried beneath the city, he'd find more than just a treasure.

This rewrite adds a potential romantic interest, introduces a specific mystery (the hidden chamber), and hints at the potential danger (Liam mentioning a rival collector). It also establishes Aiden's financial struggles, adding another layer of motivation for him to take on the adventure.

These are just suggestions, of course! The final decision on how to shape your story ultimately rests with you. I hope this helps provide a springboard for revising "Nottingham" into a captivating tale filled with romance and adventure!

AI suggests a direction for Chapter Two

 

Here is Gemini Google AI's idea for chapter two:

Chapter Two: A Christmas Eve Discovery

The warmth of Kevin's childhood home enveloped him as he stepped inside. The familiar scent of cinnamon and pine needles filled the air, a stark contrast to the biting December wind outside. His parents bustled around the living room, decorating the Christmas tree with an enthusiasm that rivaled a child's.

"Kevin! You're finally here," his mother exclaimed, her smile as bright as the twinkling lights on the tree. She pulled him into a tight hug, her embrace a comforting reminder of the love that always awaited him at home.

"Hey, Mom," Kevin mumbled, feeling a pang of guilt for neglecting his family during the holiday season. "Sorry I'm late. Work got a little crazy."

His father, a man whose weathered face held a lifetime of stories, clapped him on the shoulder. "No worries, son. We're just glad you're here. Now, how about you grab a box of ornaments and help us finish decorating?"

As Kevin unpacked the ornaments, a wave of nostalgia washed over him. Each bauble held a memory – a hand-painted ceramic snowman his sister made in kindergarten, a chipped glass star his parents bought on their honeymoon, a faded Santa Claus ornament he'd received as a child.

Suddenly, his fingers brushed against a small, velvet pouch tucked away in the bottom of the box. He pulled it out, curiosity piqued. It was worn and dusty, with a faded inscription that read "Grandma's Keepsake."

"Mom, what's this?" Kevin asked, holding up the pouch.

His mother's eyes widened in recognition. "Oh, that belonged to your grandmother. I haven't seen it in years."

Intrigued, Kevin carefully untied the drawstring. Inside, nestled on a bed of soft velvet, lay a silver locket. He opened it with trembling fingers, his breath catching in his throat.

Inside the locket, nestled against a faded photograph of a young woman with sparkling eyes, was a small, intricately carved wooden ornament. It depicted a nativity scene – a simple yet beautiful representation of the first Christmas.

A lump formed in Kevin's throat. This wasn't just any ornament; it felt imbued with a sense of history and significance.

"Grandma always said this ornament held a special story," his mother said softly, her voice tinged with emotion. "She never told me what it was, but she always kept it close."

Kevin felt a connection to his grandmother, a woman he never had the chance to meet. This tiny ornament, passed down through generations, seemed to hold a piece of her legacy.

"Maybe," Kevin said, a newfound determination in his voice, "it's time to find out what that story is."

The discovery of the locket and the nativity ornament sparked a change in Kevin. The frenetic pace of his life seemed to slow down as the spirit of Christmas began to work its magic. He found himself spending more time with his family, sharing stories and laughter by the crackling fireplace. He even volunteered to help with the Christmas Eve service at the local church, a tradition he'd abandoned years ago.

As Christmas Eve arrived, a sense of anticipation hung in the air. Kevin clutched the locket in his pocket, a silent reminder of the story waiting to be unearthed. He knew this Christmas wouldn't be just another holiday; it would be a journey of discovery, a chance to reconnect with his family and uncover a piece of his own past.

Meant To Be - Chapter One: Kevin

 


Meant To Be

A Christmas Mission

By Toni Walker 


Chapter 1: KEVIN


The winter chill was a bit more biting than Kevin Fairchild was used to. He zipped his leather jacket up a bit farther and adjusted his gloves and hat. He’d spent most of his adult life trekking across Europe on one mission or another. So now living in small town America was quite a change. He’d always had dual citizenship because his dad, Franklin was American and his mother, now passed on, had been British. 


The term small town was quite relative. The town he currently resided in was pretty sizable but when compared to European standards, it was more of a village. He definitely had been enjoying his time here. Taking a few years off from the spy game had been a hard sell for him. Joining Mackenzie Gray in the American version of his dad’s new endeavor had been a bit odd at best. He’d forgotten so much about living here. He’d been only a child then. 


Growing up in England was all he really knew. But he did know one thing, he found the gift of silence here. The benefit of days of peace where he could finally hear his own thoughts without life intruding was so heartwarming. There weren’t really a lot of truly quiet places in the world, but they were there if you only took the time to look for them. The park here had given him so much peace and calm that it made his transition more gentle. Even Nathan Able and his need to take credit for everything or turn a quick prank couldn’t crush his positive attitude. 


His dad had given him a sizable check to pass onto the Christmas mission Hannah Collins was spearheading. His father was still in England getting ready for some big changes he was about to make in his life. One of them was focusing more on his growing faith in God and the new life he hoped to build with Hannah. Hannah had really changed him and Kevin wasn’t sure he’d ever seen his father so happy… even when his mom was still alive. 


Kevin himself hadn’t really considered more than a casual relationship here and there. Michela Forsythe had gotten between him and his older brother, Ethan and their relationship while better now was far from being where he wanted to see it. Family had always been important to him and the distance between him and Ethan was a thorn in his heart, a wound that never seemed to completely heal. 


His dad had implored him to be the Santa at Hannah’s Christmas Dinner at the mission she and her many volunteers were preparing. Franklin wanted to do it himself but he knew he wouldn’t be back until sometime in the new year. There were a lot of things to wrap up and put to bed in England. His dad was passing the torch to Nathan’s father, Abraham. And while Kevin was looking forward to new endeavors, his heart was still going to miss being “the Boy Scout”, his code name at The Legacy. It was a whole new world for sure. His brother, the Chameleon, was a master of disguise and blending in. He was on a mission somewhere in England. And he had a feeling his dad was doing his best to leave his sons both better roads to travel. He wasn’t sure what that meant for Ethan, but it was sure to be an adventure. 


Kevin had picked up a small bunch of Christmas blooming flowers. Mostly to give to Hannah because his dad had requested it. But he considered keeping one bloom as a white flag to give to Michela. This was her town after all. She’d left The Legacy and came back home not long after the Bulgarian incident. It made them all very cognizant of how precious life was. She wanted to rebuild ties with her family. She’d only been a freelance agent as a way to fund her mission to hide away from them and lick her wounds. And that life had kept her busy enough but the evil specter that haunted her had never quite left her eyes. 


Kevin himself had gotten together with some military chums. John Holland was a pretty popular police sketch artist who found a huge following on YouTube during the Covid Years. And Nick Boyd had been their photographer and videographer. Kevin was sure he’d probably made a few movies by now. And not just military documentaries. Nick had a real penchant for films. No one knew films like he did. It was quite interesting getting together with them coming back here. He’d renewed his interest in art and photography because of those boys. Even got in a few games of racquetball at the local Rec Center. But he’d also found something else here in the peace of this place — God. He wasn’t sure how he’d made it through so many years without him. God had been his undercover secret, his way to deal with the perils of a spy life. 


It was when he met Hannah that he discovered the soundtrack that would populate his mind from that day forward. He had met her during a series of unfortunate events and eventually realized she was the woman taking care of Phoenix and Scarlett whom he’d met during his Bulgarian mission. She showed him how God was speaking to him through songs he found running on a loop in the back of his mind. He’d never really paid attention to it much but those repeating song lyrics always seemed to apply to whatever was going on in his life. 


He had only gotten to know Hannah through the kids and his job at The Legacy kept him on the road a lot. But he seemed to be the one grounding male influence in those kids lives. Gray, their father, was a ghost and seemed to be away even more than Kevin was. 


The Life, as he began to call his missions made him more of a loner and a solitary person. But shining images of Hannah, Phoenix and Scarlett made his spy life more meaningful. He was more of a loner on the road even when tasked to lead a team. Most of those kids liked to party hard while Kevin retreated to local libraries. He loved to read and found comfort in families bringing their kids to read books. He’d never had a chance to have a family of his own. It didn’t really seem in the cards for him. But those three had his heart for sure. 


When Scarlett had spoken of going something like he and Ethan did or wanting to become a behavioral analyst, Hannah encouraged him not to limit her. “Let her dream,” she’d said. “She may not become you but she will find her way that fills her heart and makes sense to her.”


Hannah had explained how her own father had nixed her idea of being a private eye or a detective. He told her to go into art. She’d discovered journalism and theater in high school and it helped grow her life beyond her original need to detect or save the day. Hannah was a closet mystery writer and sometimes worked closely with the local LEOs as the owner of AKA Cafe, where she was a bit of an informant. So, things did eventually even out in life when given time to simmer on low. 


A winter storm system had been hovering over the city like an ominous cloud and the night before let loose with an early December snow. It covered the city in about three inches of the white stuff. It was just enough to be annoying but not enough to keep the motivated inside. 


As Kevin walked toward AKA Cafe, Hannah’s new enterprise he found himself losing his footing as a dark figure dodged past him nudging him just enough to send him sliding toward an open hole in the sidewalk with signs cautioning him to be careful. It was a bit late for that warning as he quickly found himself at the bottom of that opening. His pride was hurt more than anything. The blue and white cat that roamed the neighborhood peered into the hole from up above. A slight cat smirk crossed his face as if saying “I saw that, Mr.” He felt a bit of standing water underneath him, probably run off from the melting snow start to deep into his pants. 


“Perfect,” he muttered. “Definitely not going to impress the kids or Hannah with his tailored Santa suit. Kevin was too slim to pretend to be jolly but he was creeping up on old. Not that 56 was old but to some, it was ancient. His hair was more dark gray with tinges of white. He’d make a convincing Santa, he figured. He hoped the phone he’d secured in his breast pocket had survived the fall because he wasn’t sure he could get out of the hole on his own. His fall had dislodged the temporary ladder. Of course, fate had that ladder still up top but out of his reach. 


He was half wishing he’d been on a mission. Bobbie, Taffy or Echo would have called in help by now. Being on his own in America definitely had its disadvantages. The buzzing in his head ceased and he tested the functionality of his limbs. Everything still seemed to be in tact. That blue and white cat’s expression was now a bit judgmental. He still sat quietly above him now a look of disdain and pity. 


“Happy Christmas to me,” he mumbled. Luckily his teeth felt all in place but the brunt of the fall had bruised his back. He could foresee more time in the gym recovering. As he located his phone still in his breast pocket, he called for assistance.  This was going to be a fun call.