Last Author Standing... not me

I was involved in a fun endeavor over at LiveJournal called Original Fiction - Last Author Standing. It is now week 3 and I have been voted off the island. Shucks. Here is the story that got me booted. Tell me what you think.

My LiveJournal:

http:// leg-alphasite.livejournal.com

Camelot in Carolton

In retrospect, I really didn’t mean for Keely Simmons to die. 

It wasn’t intentional. In fact, it was all Ali Harper’s fault. If she hadn’t stolen my boyfriend, Jason, a week before the prom, none of this would have ever happened.